Sabtu, 12 Juli 2014


KHAIRATUL UMMAH/18204            WRITING 2                             NARRATIVE ESSAY
School Or House Of Ghost
            Did you ever think that school will be saved by you. Convenience school can be seen from the school building and  people who studied in the school. So many schools in the world and we can choose where we are going to school. For some students, the most important thing is the school where they can learn and gain knowledge with others. So did I,the most important thing is I can learn and continue my study and do not drop out of school. One of my scared about that school was I did not want to study in  that haunted private school.
            After I graduated from junior high school, I went to a private school that I never seen before. When the first time I studied in there, the atmosphere is rather horrible school and school location was situated at the corner. This is the first time I entered a private school and I was feeling a bit strange. The first day of school I felt so relaxed, I met with new friends and take a class XB. In the class, only one person  that I know  is Nindi. Nindi was my friend when we met in extracurricular tutorial lesson in EXIS,I know her from junior high. Nindi came from a different junior high school. And we were shared our bench. After a few months, we know each other and I found many friends which naughty. When I was in class X, there are two classes of schools that left from school in school time ,they did not enter to school and  went to Lubuk Minturun.
            Because of that incident,teacher that tought at the time complained to representative and we got punishment. The next day,we did it again and never think about punishment. So easy for them to miss school. Not all class XB that involved left school at the time. I was surprised to see and hear that incident. I felt that was not a school, because at school I felt lonely even though  I have many friends. Many things I did not from that school likes,friends who did not respect the teacher and the bell rang at 7.30 a.m.Nevertheless, I must love my school. I should proud of it. Maybe because of I school there, I could pass SNMPTN in English Department.
            When I in XI IPS 3, I still have not been able to focus the lesson, because the system is not attractive teaching and teachers are frequently absent we often miss class. How can the school forward, if bad habits are still used and applied. And I just kept silent and regretting why did I register my buya to this school. Buya said to me that school where children of lecturer studied. But I did not fell it. It was a school for naughty students. And by the time XI IPS 3,when I absorbed the fun of learning, there is someone who did not I know send a message to me that he wanted to meet with me. After we send the messages, and the first time we meet on the edge of the road and just a bit of a talk, he is older than me 3 years. After the meeting, somehow he would call me very often. I felt a little bit uncomfortable but I enjoyed our small talk. After 2 days of we knew each other, he immediately tell his felt to me through the telephone, I became shocked and can only be silent and I did not answer it. For him, when I silent it meant I accept his love. By the way,my boyfriend named Tomi. We dated approximately 7-8 months. And my parents know my relationship with him. Finally I decided to put an end to our love story because ummi said "you want to focus on school, or going out with him?, If you want to focus on school, you cannot out with him, if you are still going out with him, then you quit school and both of you will be married". And I was not chose to continue going out with him again. And I was focused on my school when my class XII IPS3.
            I took lessons in GO (Ganesha Operation).  I got my friends in GO were mostly from SMAN in Padang such SMAN 1, SMAN 10, SMAN 2, SMAN 3, and so on. And I also felt insecure because I was the only student who came from private school. How embarrassed I was, when I went into that class. It turns out my friends who I met in GO is very different from my friends  in the school, they are friendly, nice, not stingy, and willing to share.
            When I was in class XI IPS3, I have two friends named Sri and Ratuma or commonly called Adek, I thought they were good friends. One day, I was summoned to counseling office, they slandered me and my friend Rizka that my words made them angry. And we also surprised  with exceptional acting, they were crying in the office. We were surprised, but they are the one who slandered us and counseling teacher believe their story. DAMN, why is there such a friend in this world. In fact, they were worse than what they say. What kind of friends is that. How dare they are. I  really hate both of them.
            After one year I took lessons in GO, I also gained a university entrance exams, SNMPTN. Before the test, I look for books that deal a lot of SNPMTN. Every night I learned that I can enter a state university in Padang. Although  buya is  one of  employee in the university, it did not mean I can pass with ease.
             To gain our education , no matter how many people who did not like you, how many people who support you to go forward, and insulting my efforts. From there source of our power to keep the spirit to achieve successful. From bad experiences that I experienced at the school, private school turns unpleasant.

7 komentar:

  1. This is a nice story. Pay attention about punctuation and grammar in writing essay.

    BalasHapus
  2. it is interesting true story,
    but I suggest you to Please attention with word that you use to show something, example "So many schools in the world and we can choose where we are going to school", maybe you can change it with "So many schools in the world THAT CAN WE choose wherever we want.
    and in each paragraph, be careful to choose word or conjunction to connect the sentence,

    BalasHapus
  3. nice story :) there are some grammatical errors and puntuation in your essay please check again :)

    " Did you ever think that school will be saved by you ?? "

    BalasHapus
  4. your essay is good kak...
    please pay attention to your grammar and accuracy in your sentences.....

    BalasHapus
  5. there are some gramatical errors, ima. Beside, you use different level of font for each of paragraph.

    BalasHapus
  6. your topic is great, but there are some grammatical erros.

    BalasHapus
  7. It is a nice essay
    but you need to Improve your conclusion,

    BalasHapus