KHAIRATUL
UMMAH/18204 WRITING 2
SMARTPHONE
: Good Or
Not
For
Health?
Are you smartphone user , why you
choose a smartphone as your gadget, or do
think you will be cool by having a smartphone?.Smartphone is one of
technology that have many functions and applications. You can choose a
brand of smarphone that you want likes Samsung,Sony,BlackBerry,and so on.
Although smartphone become a trend as new comer for phone user,not all people
have and using smartphone. Some people choose a smartphone to make their job
easier.Half of people do not use a smartphone because of health or cost. Besides
,the smartphone have many functions and application to be access ,it does not
mean all people can use smarthphone. There are some advantages and
disadvantages in using a smartphone.
There are advantages in using smart phone. First,
smartphone can make communication become easy. Many
applications that you can use likes facebook,twitter,BBM,line,kakao talk
,youtube,etc.Those applications can be access easily that you can chatting with
your friends from another country without going to their town.And also, we can send a
voice,pictures,video,etc to them.
For example, when we use a Kakaotalk, we can chat with people in other country
and talking about anything. In smartphone, we can use all applications for chatting
and those applications have one similarity is can write and send
a message.
Then ,smartphone will make users
update about new information , hot issue ,or gossip about something. For
examples, Ivan Gunawan wants to be a stepfather
for Bilqis (Ayu
Ting – Ting ‘s daughter). It is the hot gossip lately in entertaiment world. Or
if you busy and cannot watch television,you will check the hot issue by using
your smartphone to search that issue.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages in using smartphone. It can cause some diseases likes dry eyes,
amnesia, and can be mentalistic illness. Mr.Allon Barsam from Luton and
Dunstable University Hospital said that
do
not use a smartphone at least 15 minutes at the same time in the room without light . It can cause your
eyes become dry. To decrease your dry eyes, you may set text in your smartphone
bigger. And
also Dr Sandy
Chapman, chief director for the Center for Brain Health in Dallas, who has
studied the effects of technology on the brain, was quoted in nbcdwf.com, saying: "It's really keeping us at this
distracted level, so everything that we're thinking about tends to be quicker,
less synthesized, and that's what's making us dumber."
Those
experts said that how dangerous smartphone for our health especially your eyes
and brain. Some people never think that using smartphone is a wrong choose.
And then, smartphone make us
individualist. Why I said
like that,if they do not do anything ,they just busy with their smartphone
without know about something happen
around
them. They just update information from another country and never response problem in our country itself(based on my
brother experience). In a real world,we have alot of friends and in social media ,we also have much
friends. But users of smartphone think
that their friends are only in their
contact of their smartphone. The real friend is a friend that
always together with you wherever you are,knowing you privately,close to
you,you can touch them,they know your conditions. According to a psychologist
Dr.Emma Short From University of Bedforshiren,technology can make you difficult
to manage the boundaries in your live.
So , do not make your smartphone make you far from your real world.
In conclusion, using a smartphone is a one way to connect with people far from
you. Whatever you want, you will get from a smartphone,including get a new friend
and become you girlfriend or boyfriend later on. It is interesting. But ,use a
smartphone do not make you forget
about your real friend and time. You
have to know how you can keep your health and still looking good with a
smartphone. Using a smartphone do not make you become smart. Be a good user if you do not want to be sick
with smartphone. If you get hard
diseases, using a smartphone it is not
cool anymore. Think again if you want to use a smartphone and also think your
health.
References
SOLOPOS.COMBAHAYASMARTPHONEAwas,GadgetBisaSebabkanJerawat&InsomniabahayasmartphonegadgetinsomniajerawatKesehatan-Lifestyle.htm accessed 7th 2014
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BalasHapusand it is nice..
I suggest you to attention with space,
"You can choose a brand of smarphone that you want likes Samsung,Sony,BlackBerry,and so on"
maybe u can put space after comma. so this sentence became "You can choose a brand of smarphone that you want likes Samsung,(space)Sony,(space)BlackBerry and so on."
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it is good topic. you need to add some sources and pay attention to conjunction.
BalasHapus